Original Dialogue:
Jo: She works at
the station, is that where you met?
Bill: I don’t
want to fight
Jo: I’m not
fighting, I’m talking
Bill: I don’t
want to fight
Jo: She is nice
Bill: ha ha
Jo: O ‘O, she is
not nice?
Bill: I know
what you meant
Jo: you do?
Bill: yes, so
don’t do this
Jo: Ok, I am
making extremely civilized conversation, and you are biting my head off
Rewritten Dialogue:
Jo: You met with
her in the station, where she actually works, right?
Bill: I am not
going to fight with you on this
Jo: I am just
asking about her, why you taking it as a fight?
Bill: I have
already said, I don’t want to fight with you
Jo: She looked
nice to me
Bill: laughing
loudly
Jo: why are you
laughing? It means that she is not a nice person
Bill: I know
what you are trying to figure out
Jo: Oh really
Bill: yeah, I
really understand your purpose of making these questions
Jo: I just want
to know about her, that’s why asking these questions in a civilized manner.
Don’t know why you are getting it so wrong
YouTube Video Link: https://youtu.be/esbqNMwQqqw?t=12