Manuscript review of How youth and adults engage with interactive Digital Texts
Choice of problem of How youth and adults engage with interactive
Digital Texts
This article is about digital texts around the
internet. The author is telling about, these digital texts are not attractive
due to this I am not enjoying reading from the internet just due to such texts.
In that case, she starts with a lovely intro about the problem. He had set an
example of the delight game content. He had highlighted the main problem with
the digital text written for the game content. He had said such text is making
uncomfortable the readers that are reading through digital means like E-book
tablets and smartphone.
In the introduction part, the main problem is
defined in a perfect way by the author. He also said that due to such text, the
reader is not attracted because digital texts contain no attraction for the
reader. Now the next thing is that this problem is only for adult readers. This is because they are
required glasses and proper light for reading anything. Such electronic means
may damage their eyesight. In the last of the intro, there are also two
important questions asked by the author. These questions are related to the problem
statement of this research.
Theoretical framework of How youth and adults engage with interactive
Digital Texts
According to the research, it can be seen that
this study is completely farmed by the theory. This is because this study based
on digital texts and the behavior of adults. For that case, there is complete
information present in the framework. Moreover, it can be noted that the whole
study is also employing a theoretical framework. This is because if you take a
look at this framework, the author is using references from different authors
that are giving information about this study. This shows that the whole
theoretical framework is highlighting the main points of the study.
Another thing is that the author had presented two questions for the
study. According to this framework, there is a deep understanding of these
questions. This is because it can be seen that the first question was related
to the reading of digital interactive texts by young and adults. For this
question, the author had highlighted the previous researches regarding it. Due
to this both of these questions are briefly answered in the given framework for
this research.
Mode of inquiry of How
youth and adults engage with interactive Digital Texts
In this section, there is complete information
about the methodology of this research. It can be noted that for this research
the author had used the primary research method. This is because he had created
a survey and interview questions from the participants. This shows that the
methodology for this research is comprehensively explained by the author.
Moreover, this methodology was related to Delight games. The author had
explained properly who the players of this game are? What is the background of
this game?
According to the given question of the
research, it can be seen that the study employs a methodology is not totally
appropriate according to the required questions. This is because the questions
were related to the experience of the reader and also the reason for reading
digital text. But it can be noted that the methodology is providing information
about the delight game. There is no information about why readers are reading
digital interactive texts. Moreover, it is also not giving proper information
regarding the aspects of the experience of readers. Due to this, it shows that
the methodology is completely against the research questions. But overall this
methodology is perfect because it giving proper information about everything.
Rigor of analysis of
How youth and adults engage with interactive Digital Texts
According to the analysis section of this
paper, it can be noted that the author had followed the recommendations of
Huberman, Saldana, and miles. For that case, the author had analyzed the data
of youth and adults separately. The fact is showing that the analysis shown by
the author in this research is perfect. There is brief information about how
these results are achieved and what the outcomes of these results are. This
means that in this manuscript there is proper information about the present
data and analysis. This is because the author has presented a spreadsheet in
which there is analysis is performed. The next fact is this analysis is
completely supported by the data and methodology. This is because it can be
noted that in the methodology the author has used surveys and interviews for
extracting data of the user. Due to this fact, it can be noted that the whole
analysis is performed according to the methodology and data in the manuscript.
Moreover, the author had presented the analysis in a perfect way for the
readers. This is because he had separated the data of the young and adult
participants and briefly analyzed it.
Interpretation of
implication of How youth and adults engage with interactive Digital Texts
According to the given manuscript, it can be
seen that author had presented complete information about the required data.
Moreover, all suggestions are based on the study data. From the finding section
of the manuscript, it can be seen that the author had concluded the research by
four primary reasons. All of these reasons are extracted from the whole data. The
next fact is that all implications are explicit for this research. The author
had presented great research in this manuscript. This is because the author had
presented each and everything with perfection. The result section is giving
proper information about the primary reasons for this manuscript. Due to this, the manuscript is contributing to
a better understanding of the whole issue. In this manuscript, the author has
provided brief information about the research question through the help of
analysis and findings.
Quality of writing of
How youth and adults engage with interactive Digital Texts
From this manuscript, it can be seen that the quality
of writing is extremely high. At the start of the manuscript, the author had
presented an attractive intro about the topic. This will give complete
information about the required topic. It can be noted that in the introduction
section the main problem of the research is briefly explained. This showed that
the author wanted to provide complete information about its research in the
manuscript. Another thing is that from the theoretical framework to the findings
of the research. The author was completely associated with the topic and given a
research problem. Then according to this fact, the author has provided complete
information about the research question in an efficient way.
Furthermore, the author is also communicating
ideas coherently and effectively in this manuscript. This is because, in the
theoretical framework, the author had used research from different authors and
mentioned it in the manuscript. This will increase the effectiveness of the
research. Moreover, another thing is that findings and analysis are
comprehensively explained. There is no doubt present in the manuscript for the
reader. If any researcher wanted to gain information about future research then
it can be gained easily by this manuscript.
Recommendation of How
youth and adults engage with interactive Digital Texts
There is only some recommendation according to
this manuscript. The first one is related to the increase of the graphical interface
in the analysis section. It will help in a better understanding of the results.
Moreover, I am also accepting the palate as a reviewer. The main reason is that
he had explained each and every thing with complete perfection. In the result section
each category is explained properly by the author. The next one is that
methodology must be minimized. There is no need to write such a long
methodology for the manuscript.
References of How youth and adults engage with
interactive Digital Texts
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Conradi, K., Lawrence, C., Jang, B.G., & Meyer, J.P. (2012). Reading
attitudes of middle school students: Results of a U.S. survey. Reading
Research Quarterly, 47, 283-206.