Discussion on the summary section should include the main objectives of three experiments, as well as, the core results which are missed in your case.

2. Write in a 3rd person style; don’t use the first-person style by using “I”, “We”, etc. Moreover, improve English Language! It is highly recommended to contact the Center of Academic Writing for improving the language of the report.

3. The introduction for the report should start with a general introduction then moving towards more specific information and at the end of the introduction section you can provide the primary objectives of the report; don’t forget to support all the information with the citation.

4. Under the principles and methods section; 1) enhance the theory part focusing on the concept and real application of the experiment in the real-life supported with references, 2) present the equations you are going to use in the calculation section, 3) use scientific sources as references in all sections of the report, 4) enhance the procedures and write id details for the steps of each experiment.

5. In the data and results section; 1) make sure you provide correct units of all the values you presented; 2) provide some text to introduce the data and results before presenting them; 3) table title should be at the top of the table, not below it; 4) check the calculation and make sure that the number you got is all correct without any errors; 5) define all the symbols used in the equations before using them in the calculation.

6. Improve titles of the sections and subsections.

7. Discussion section (check the spelling); this is a very important section! I want a deep discussion of each experiment. Analyze the results you got and discuss them with justification and provide your opinion. You have to link your results with the results presented in the literature supported by the references. Support your justification with the literature review, show the error percentage for each experiment and how that will affect, discuss the causes of these errors and how they can be avoided, etc.

8. The conclusion section; the first paragraph is about the main objective of the report followed by the conclusion of the first, second, and third experiments. The last paragraph is general for the entire report. Remember that in this section you are answering the report objectives, that’s why for each experiment, you have to represent the objectives in a different format and present the core results with the justification, which should also be concise.

9. References; don’t forget to follow CU Harvard references format; cite all the information in text and provide the references at the end in the references list. I recommend you to use scientific sources in your report.