Personal Essay – Draft
For this writing assignment, you have two choices. Please select one of the following options for your essay:
Describe a person, place, or object that has special meaning in your life.
Describe a particular moment or occurrence in your life that had special meaning to you.
Use the techniques described in sections 6.3 and 6.4 of Essentials of College Writing and expand upon the prewriting done in the discussion forum for the past three weeks to provide specific details about the person, place, object, or event so that readers can visualize the subject and/or feel present in the story. Your description should be specific and appeal to the five senses. Please be sure to read and review the “Example Personal Essay – Draft” document before beginning your draft for more guidance on writing a descriptive essay.
This rough draft needs to be at least 550 words, and it should have a thesis statement that clearly states what you are going to be writing about. View the sample Personal Essay – Draft to guide you as you complete this assignment.
When submitting your draft, make sure to
Proofread your work for errors in grammar, mechanics, and style.
Format the essay according to the “APA Template” handout.
Perform a word count check to make sure the essay is 550 to 800 words in length.
Save the document as a Microsoft Word or compatible .doc or .docx file.
Use a naming convention that includes your last name, week number, and the assignment number (e.g., smith_w2_a1.doc).
2nd Assignment:
Week Three Journal – Paraphrasing
This week, you continue writing your journal entries. This journal is designed to give you practice in academic writing, which is very different from the personal essay writing that you have been practicing. Academic writing entails making a point and supporting that point with information from a reputable source. There are three ways to support a point with information from a source: quoting, paraphrasing, or summarizing. This week, you will practice paraphrasing a source and citing that source in your journal entry. Please be sure to read and review the “Example Journal Entry – Paraphrasing” document, which shows how quotations can be integrated.
Note: The journal assignment should not be confused with a personal journal. This activity requires organization, effective stylistics and grammar, and proper source incorporation. It is not a free-writing or reflective writing exercise.
Both of the personal essays we have read this week, “How to Say Nothing in 500 Words” and “Life Under the Chief Doublespeak Officer,” use narrative and/or descriptive elements (sections 6.3 and 6.4 in Essentials of College Writing, and each has a clear purpose.
Write about one of the essays assigned in this week’s readings. In 250 to 500 words
State the purpose of the essay.
Describe one descriptive writing pattern being used in the essay (refer to section 6.4 in Essentials of College Writing).
Explain why you think that descriptive writing pattern is used well by the writer. Incorporate a paraphrase from the essay and properly cite the essay.
Explain how you plan to use the same descriptive writing pattern in your personal essay.
Title of Your Essay
Your Name
Course Number & Title
Instructor's Name
Month Day, Year
TITLE OF PAPER 2
Title of Your Essay
Start the first paragraph here. It should introduce your reader to the subject you are
writing about, as well as your particular position or claim. Before you can create your first
paragraph, consider these “pre-writing” tips. You can use this template to help you format your
paper. For longer papers, include sub-headings or levels of heading.
The writing process
Spend time planning your paper. A good practice is to brainstorm ideas and decide how
to express the main idea or thesis. Once you have a rough idea of what you want to say or argue,
create an outline or list to help you organize the evidence you plan to present. For more
suggestions, please read about thesis statements on our Ashford Writing Center website: Thesis
Statements. Other helpful tools on our website are the Thesis Generator and Moving from
Prompt to Thesis.
Writing the body paragraphs
Each paragraph of your assignment should be clear and easy to follow. We have several
good resources to help you write a strong paragraph, such as How to Write a Good Paragraph
and the P.I.E. Paragraph Structure.
Using citations correctly
In addition to being well-written, each paragraph should include an in-text citation to all
ideas, references, or quotations that are from outside sources and research. The Ashford Writing
Center provides many resources to help you follow correct citation style (primarily APA) and
gives lessons and examples of how to paraphrase and cite sources. The APA Key Elements page
is a good place to start.
https://awc.ashford.edu/cd-formatting-headings%20in-apa-style.html
https://awc.ashford.edu/writing-tools-outline.html
https://awc.ashford.edu/essay-dev-thesis-statements.html
https://awc.ashford.edu/essay-dev-thesis-statements.html
https://awc.ashford.edu/writing-tools-thesis-generator.html
https://awc.ashford.edu/essay-dev-prompt-to-thesis-handout.html
https://awc.ashford.edu/essay-dev-prompt-to-thesis-handout.html
https://awc.ashford.edu/essay-dev-good-paragraph.html
https://awc.ashford.edu/essay-dev-pie-paragraph.html
https://awc.ashford.edu/cd-in-text-citation-guide.html
https://awc.ashford.edu/cd-guidelines-for-quoting.html
https://awc.ashford.edu/cd-apa-key-elements.html
TITLE OF PAPER 3
References
The following are commonly used references. Please fill in the required information, and if you
need more help, see the AWC References page. References are listed in alphabetical order.
Ashford Textbook (Online edition): *
Author, A. (Year published). Title of book: Subtitle of book (edition, if other than the first)
[Electronic version]. Retrieved from from URL
Example: Witt, G. A., & Mossler, R. A. (2010). Adult development and life assessment [Electronic
version]. Retrieved from https://content.ashford.edu/books/4
Online Journal Article (such as from the Ashford Library):**
Author, A. (Year Published). Article title. Journal Name, Volume(Issue), page range. doi:# or
Retrieved from journal’s homepage URL
**When including a URL for an online journal, you must search for the journal’s home page and
include this in your reference entry. You may not include the URL found through your
university library, as readers will not have access to this library.
Examples: Churchill, S. D., & Mruk, C. J. (2014). Practicing what we preach in humanistic and positive
psychology. American Psychologist, 69(1), 90-92. doi:10.1037/a0034868
Santovec, M. (2008). Easing the transition improves grad retention at Trinity U. Women in
Higher Education, 17(10), 32. Retrieved from
https://awc.ashford.edu/cd-apa-references-list.html
TITLE OF PAPER 4
http://www.trinitydc.edu/education/files/2010/09/Women_in_higher_
Ed_Trinity_Transistions_10_08.pdf
Online Magazine:*
Author, A. (Year, Month Date Published). Article title. Magazine Title. Retrieved from URL
Example: Walk, V. (2013, April 29). Can this woman fix Europe? Time. Retrieved from
http://www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,213969.html
YouTube Video:*
Author, A. [Screen name]. (Year, Month, Day). Title of video [Video file]. Retrieved from URL
Example: Apsolon, M. [markapsolon]. (2011, September 9). Real ghost girl caught on video tape 14
[Video file]. Retrieved from http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6nyGCbxD848
Web Page:*
Author, A. (Year, Month, Date Published). Article title. Retrieved from URL
Example—Corporate web page: U.S. Department of Labor, Bureau of Labor Statistics. (2008). Police and detectives. Retrieved
from http://bls.gov/oco/pdf/ocos160.pdf
Example—Article or section within web page with no author: Presentation tools. (n.d.). Retrieved from http://web2014.discoveryeducation.com/web20tools-
presentation.cfm
*Please delete the headers and notes in this document before submitting your assignment.