Discussion Chapter of thesis

I need someone to rewrite my discussion chapter of my thesis which I have completed but have to redo according to my supervisor's instruction,You can find the details of my research question and hypothesis in file attached.

There are altogether 16 hypotheses and their results you can find in the file. Each results of hypothesis needs to be explained across all respondents, asian countries' respondents and non-asian country's respondents. 

Following is the first hypothesis

H1a: Autonomy has a positive relationship with vigour

Across all respondent’s autonomy increases vigour but has not impact on vigour in both Asian and non-Asian countries. The finding across all respondents is consistent with the JDR model and previous studies (references of JDR model and other model related to turnover intention and motivation). However, the finding in Asia and non-Asian countries is inconsistent with JDR but consistent with studies such as …

Explain why/when autonomy improves vigour – find reasons explain them and find support in literature

1. Summarise the finding by hypotheses 

2. State whether it agrees with JDR model theory or not and other studies

3. Explain why and when? Reasons why the hypothesis supported or not in Asian and Non-Asian countries with references

4. Try to give examples 

similarly, all hypothesis needs to be done.

Below is the comments provided by my supervisor after I have submitted the below file. You can go through the comments below and also the comments mentioned in the file which is highlighted in green colour.

The same comments applied more less across the entire discussion 

1. for each hypothesis, please restate the finding on all respondents and across the regions (this you have done)


2. for all hypotheses, indicate whether the finding is consistent with the JDR or not 


3. for the findings whether it agrees with the hypothesis or not, indicate studies that found similar findings 


4. for each finding across respondents or across the regional areas, provide specific reasons from within the context of our study in terms of the demographics or the regions to show why the finding is the way it it. this is where you are making your contribution to research. Like i explained like that, provide some examples to support your point. Why one hypothesis be supported in Asia but not Africa - there would have to be certain factors in these contexts that explain these differences. In the discussion section, we are not re re-presenting literature but we are explaining the "why"of the findings.


5. Please revise the discussion of the findings based on these comments. 

Thanks a lot.