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The Report Project is a draft need some change . I copy feedback from our professor to follow , edit the final paper.

Very good and property citation ,Introduction and conclusion.No plagiarisms.

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Walmart is a good organization to examine.

Your paper requires work.

Apply APA Style formatting to every area of the paper.

Your introduction needs to be shortened to half a page.

What do you mean by data collection? This is not data collection. Remove this heading. Remove, all words pertaining to: my, me, I etc.

What are you trying to state in pages 6 -11? I am not following. The content presented is disorganized. You need to insert headings and sub headings to organize the content.

Your Organizational Relationship section requires more detail.

What is the difference between Organizational Relationships and Organizational Stakeholders? You seem to be repeating certain components of this paper. Decide which of the two you want to address in this paper and remove the other.

There are quite a few arguments and perspectives that are not supported with citations, please address these throughout the paper - just to list a few:

“Walmart is one of the multinational retailing corporation located in the United States. The corporation functions as a chain of grocery store, hypermarket and discount department store. The firm was founded in 1962 by Sam Walton and officially incorporated in October 1969. Moreover, the firm engages in the operation of retail, wholesale and other sections all over the world. It’s the largest world organization by revenue whereby it approximately generated four hundred and eighty billion dollars in 2016. The corporation has eleven thousand six hundred and ninety-five stores all over the world. The main products sold by the corporation include electronics, home and furniture, music, clothing, foot wear, toys, jewelry, sporting goods and fitness, health and beauty, grocery, photo finishing and craft supply”

“Additionally, the firm has the following division. Walmart U.S, Walmart international and Sam’s cub global e-commerce. The firm investment outside North America has met mixed reaction. It has highly succeeded in some parts especially in the United Kingdom, china, and South America though it has failed in Germany and South Korea. Furthermore, the firm operates in major cities over the world, and it has established subsidiaries in the following countries Canada, Mexico, Chiles, Central America and many others.”

“The firm mostly operates online where the customer purchases Walmart products through the online platform. The corporation, therefore, has so many computers that are located in every department. The wife routers also help to connect to the internet easily and therefore the wifi connection equipment are provided in most departments.

Walmart is a corporation that is licensed by the government and operates legally, and thus it has policies and guidelines, which ensure the firm operates ethically and does not violate the rule of law. The firm also protects the customers from harmful products and other living organisms. Sam’s club and Walmart are committed to ensuring they provide the customers with affordable, safe and susta