Eniola Asowo English 1B S. Bausch Paragraph Map The power of believing that you can improve “others with a fixed mindset and who lived for the moment failed because they were not ready for questions that challenge their intelligence, students who have been trained on a growth mindset recorded a systematic improvement in their academic performance while those who were not trained recorded dismal academic performance. TOPIC SENTENCE Education was the only escape Routh for me as a kid, the environment, and the mindset push me through. CLAIM 1 CLAIM 2 Family and environment Incentive and praises PIECE OF EVIDENCE 1 PIECE OF EVIDENCE 1 Additional home study and the help of family and friends Encouragement and vision PIECE OF EVIDENCE 2 Understanding the topic, rather than a pass mark PIECE OF EVIDENCE 2 A lot of rewards when I did well in my academics and the excitement of who I want to become I was brought up in an environment whereby success was encouraged, and there were rewards for performing well, and this upbringing has made chase rewards for work done well. Since commencing my education at kindergarten, my parents encouraged me to work hard and top in my class. They always rewarded me when I did well and when I failed to top in my class, there were no rewards. Together with my siblings, we worked hard because we wanted to be rewarded. ...