I have my macbeth essay completed and attached and got the following feedback:
Dialogue is attempted or missing from the rising action and falling action of the narrative.
Your revisions and edits should now be complete and you have a final, polished narrative to publish, or, in this case, to submit to your instructor for grading. Before submitting your narrative, you need to complete these tasks to analyze and reflect on your writing:
Use the highlighting tool in your word processor to highlight at least five examples of vivid detail in your narrative.
Use a different color to highlight at least five interesting verbs used in your writing.
Use a third color to highlight your use of temporal words or transitions.
Complete the Publishing your narrative worksheet.
Publishing Your Narrative Worksheet
Paste your highlighted narrative in this space. Provide a key so your instructor can tell which color highlighter you used for each category.
Reflection 1: Name the two people who reviewed your draft and discuss in a minimum of five sentences how their feedback helped you improve your writing.
Reflection 2: Compare your first draft and your final draft side-by-side. Discuss in at least five sentences the changes you made and why your final draft is an improvement over your first draft.