Answer the following two questions about Mariah’s paragraph: 1. Do you agree with Mariah’s decision to make the deletions she made? Did she cut too much, too little, or just enough? Explain. 2. Is the explanation of what screen resolution means a digression? Or is it audience friendly and essential to understanding the paragraph? Explain.Collaboration Please share with a classmate and compare your answers. Now start to revise the first draft of the essay you wrote in Section 8 “Writing Your Own First Draft”. Reread it to find any statements that affect the unity of your writing. Decide how best to revise.
Answer the following two questions about Mariah’s paragraph:
1. Do you agree with Mariah’s decision to make the deletions she made? Did she cut too much, too little, or just enough? Explain.
2. Is the explanation of what screen resolution means a digression? Or is it audience friendly and essential to understanding the paragraph? Explain.Collaboration
Please share with a classmate and compare your answers.
Now start to revise the first draft of the essay you wrote in Section 8 “Writing Your Own First Draft”. Reread it to find any statements that affect the unity of your writing. Decide how best to revise.