Https www youtube com watch v vt1pwfnh5pc

Remix Analysis Paper Rubric

Please talk about the arites of the orginal song and the rimax song , and the story behaind the song .
5-6 pages
the song "Fix you"
the paper for the first draft "remix_culture_for_the_song_fix_you" add it to the essay.
there eample to show you what rimax paper .

Rubric Name: Remix Analysis Paper Rubric


Criteria
Introduction is engaging and provides a strong and focused thesis. Conclusion provides strong sense of closure.

Introduction is engaging and establishes a functional thesis. Conclusion provides general sense of closure.

Introduction is uninteresting, unclear, or lacks a clear thesis. Conclusion is vague or underdeveloped. Essay lacks clear closure.

Introduction and/or conclusion are non-existent.

Paper displays clear and intentional organization. Essay is engaging and purposeful.

Clear consideration has been given to organization. Overall flow is strong.

Occasional lapses in focus and/or coherence. Paper jumps around without clear sense of direction.

No clear method of organization.

Argument is well developed. Claims are clear and paper stays focused on proving a specific point.

Argument is established. A majority of claims support the overall point. A few lapses in focus or clarity.

Overall argument is hazy. A number of claims lack focus or do not help prove the paper's general or specific point.

Paper is missing argument. Claims are not established or there is no specific purpose to paper.

Strong examples, quotes, sources logically connect to claims and argument. Evidence smoothly integrated.

Good examples, quotes, and sources support claims and argument. Integration of evidence could be improved.

Examples, quotes, and sources are present but may be underused or do not logically support claims and argument. Clear holes in evidence.

Evidence is missing or does not connect to claims and argument.

Strong analysis of sources, examples, and evidence that clearly connects back to argument. Analysis shows thoughtful and logical consideration.

Analysis logically connects examples, sources, and evidence to argument. Some points may be too general or lack depth but a majority of the analysis is strong.

A significant amount of the analysis is too general or lacks depth. Does not provide logical connection back to argument.

Analysis is missing or does not connect back to the argument.

Paper is free of grammatical or spelling errors.

Grammatical and spelling errors are rare and do not detract from paper.

Noticeable grammatical and spelling errors that compromise paper's overall quality.

Excessive grammatical or spelling errors that make paper nearly unreadable.

Student worked with tutor in Writing Center and attached signature sheet to their draft.

Student worked with tutor in Writing Center and attached signature sheet to their draft.

Student did not meet with tutor in Writing Center or attach a signature sheet to their draft.

Student did not meet with tutor in Writing Center or attach a signature sheet to their draft.

Overall Score

Covers – Same song, different artist. May have single small word changes in lyrics.

Samples – Taking the beat or chorus of a song and using it for an entirely different song.

Mash-ups – Combining two or more songs together to create a new song. Typically done by DJs

Stories:

Medium Adaptation – Taking a story in one format and transferring it to a different format (ex: book to movie, foreign film to American film, movie to tv show)

Creative Adaptation – Taking an original story and changing it and making it creatively unique (ex: Hamlet vs Lion King; Pride & Prejudice vs Pride, Prejudice, and Zombies; The Odyssey vs O’ Brother Where Art Thou)

Historical Adaptation – Taking a historical event or figure and revising history for creative reasons (The Battle of Thermopylae vs 300; Pocahontas the historical figure vs Pocahontas the Disney princess; Abraham Lincoln the president vs Abraham Lincoln Vampire Slayer)

Parody – Taking an original text and making it humorous (ex: Weird Al music, Star Wars vs Spaceballs, Scream vs Scary Movie)

Music Example Links:

Mashups: Norwegian Recycling – “No Taylor, No Scar” (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tran2ChS_Gw) Isosine – “We Are Coming Undone” (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=22al-o6rONk) Covers: Nine Inch Nails – “Hurt” [Original] (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fb4qyuR7_cc) Johnny Cash – “Hurt” [Cover] (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vt1Pwfnh5pc) Talk Talk – “It's My Life” [Original] (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5ixRWvrkUHo) No Doubt – “It's My Life” [Cover] (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ubvV498pyIM) Sampling: Bruce Hornsby – “The Way It Is” (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cOeKidp-iWo) Tupac – “Changes” (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nay31hvEvrY) Aerosmith – “Dream On” (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JAglUR-KXfQ) Eminem – “Sing for the Moment” (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MxWP8-50Le8)