I need 1000 words in my personal statement

Need personal statement

Direction,

Need to write personal statment for uk master degree course , person from Pakistan done bachelor in arts from Allama iqbal open university 

Please state your reasons for choosing the course(s), relevant experience, and career plans

Pre-Master's (Arts, Publishing & Humanities

her subjet is arts and she done bachelor from pak now she want to study in oxford brooks univ she need to provide personal statment for admission ,

Basically she want to study pre-master course in oxford brooks universty . What will benfit this course to your future , why you chose oxforrd brooks universty ,

Her previous bachelor was in arts subject , she done seconday school in 2012 then she was doing job in private school as lab assistant from 2012 to 2017 ,

Bachelor from allama iqbal open universty from 2016 to 2018 . 

From 2017 to till now she is running own beauty saloon business

PERSONAL STATEMENT

I am writing to you requesting for an opportunity to join your institution for my foundation course and thereafter my post graduate program. I am interested in pursuing my foundation course at your institution because it will allow me to get a feel for the tertiary education environment in the UK, will allow me to improve on my academic skills that I attained while at the university back in Pakistan and will help me gain credit towards furthering my studies at the masters level. After the completion of the foundation course, I have a plan of going back to my home country to start programs that will be aligned to my foundation course. Since the levels of education in London are more improved than in Pakistan, having taken my course at your institution will give me the a higher ground to recruit more people in the programs that I will be starting.

I believe finishing the foundation course will enhance my skills which will be of help when I start my post graduate studies. This fits into my post study plans because through the foundation course concepts, I will have already gained the necessary skills and will have been fully in matters regarding my career field hence enhancing my competitiveness. I had earlier applied for my Short Term Study Visa into the United Kingdom but it was declined by the Immigration officer because he was not convinced that the amount of money that was in my bank account could sustain me in the UK and that I did not have a clear source of funds to bail me out in case of any emergency while in London. The discrepancy in employment information indicated in the refusal was as a result of a slight confusion. Because I have always spent most of my life in Pakistan, I mistakably misinterpreted the UK’s terms of payment with those of Pakistan hence causing some discrepancies. However, I have now corrected hence corrected that and am hopeful that my application will be granted this time round.

 the above is previous personal statment for her admission , if this can help u to write better then this one 

Course : pre-master diploma in english language and study skills

 need to explain why she want to study in oxford brooks universty in uk 

What this course will help to in future From pakistan, she completed bachelor f4om allama iqbal open university

She complete secondary school 2012 , then she was doing job in private school 2012 to 2017 

She want to do master in uk so she need to produce personal statment for un8veraty admission

She is running beauty pallor since 2017 till now

You can add up these points from the past to make 1000 word but please focus on future after the master from uk university

Please don,t copy past