Thesis statement on nat turner

I already have most of the essay done, the only thing that needs to be done is Nat Turners and comparing them. Do you think you can just edit what I have and finish off the rest for me please? I only need about 600 words. The sources required to use for the comparison on Nat Turner are "Confessions of Nat Turner" and the attached document "From Slavery to Freedom"

1.) Leaders At 14 years old, Telemaque boarded a slave- trading ship that frequented the slave markets of Barbados and St. Domingue, belonging to 34 year- old sailor, Captain Joseph Vesey (Robertson 51). Captain Vesey noticed a distinction of intelligence that separated Telemaque from the other slaves, he was later sold to a sugar cane plantation in Charleston in 1781 (Robertson 53). After faking epilepsy to escape the sugar cane plantation, Telemaque was bought back by Captain Vesey who changed Telemaque’s name to Denmark Vesey in 1783 (Robertson 54). Joseph took Denmark under his wing as an interpreter and assistant to whom he would serve as a slave for 17 years (Robertson 54). Denmark Vesey was highly intelligent reportedly speaking Danish, French, English, with limited knowledge of Creole and Gullah; he was also literate (Robertson 57). Denmark’s life as a slave really began when he started serving above deck on Captain Vesey’s slave ship in 1781, where Joseph decided to permanently live in Charleston in 1783 (Robertson 55). He spent his days acquiring the skills of a carpenter, “constructing ships or buildings at this expanding slave port” (Robertson 60). Denmark Vesey purchased an Easy Bay Street lottery ticket on December 9, 1799 and in 1800 found out that he had won, he used the money to buy his freedom from Captain Joseph (Robertson 70). He then became a carpenter for ten years (until 1810) before becoming a violent revolutionary until the year 1822 with the perfect cover to plan a revolt, entering the African Methodist Episcopal Church in 1815 to give the people of African descent a place to practice their beliefs, enslaved or freed (Robertson 73). He took the role of a “black messianic deliverer” by conjoining the Islam and Africanized Christianity of the people surrounding him and formed a church “to encourage an African- based Obeah religion” (Robertson 70). It is unknown exactly the religious standpoint that Denmark stood, but he “accepted polygamy and scorned those blacks who drank intoxicating beverages” (Robertson 66). Nat Turner and Denmark Vesey shared many things in common, however a key difference that could also pose as similarity between the two regard their lives as slaves. Nat turner resided in Virginia’s Southampton County (Franklin 157). Unlike South Carolina, Virginia’s main export was tobacco which entailed an entirely different labor process than cotton did, but both were brutal. Slave revolts didn’t begin until the mid 1600’s and any that did take place during the seventeenth century were “generally centered in Virginia,” and by the year 1715, the population of Virginia, the Carolinas, and Maryland totaled one-third to be slaves (Aptheker 513). --Conditions On both December 3, 1817 and June 9, 1818, the government of Charleston sent its police force to physically abuse and “arrest” members of the congregation, A.M.E. with intent to destroy the church building (Robertson 81). The police raid of 1817 resulted in the arrest of 469 blacks on the charge of disorderly conduct while in 1818 only 143 were arrested (Robertson 88). In the same year, 1817, Vesey was knowledgeable in the Koran, and deeply immersed himself in the Bible, this gave way for him to seize the church with motives of “organizing and recruiting for his… revolt” by using Biblical scripture to make the enslaved and “powerless men willing to fight for their freedom” (Robertson 82). Vesey felt that it was a commandment from the Lord for a violent black revolution, describing that the Bible is against “slavery and bondage” (Robertson 80).