A very old man with enormous wings conflict

Running head: LITERARY ANALYSIS 1

Literary Analysis of a Very Old Man with Enormous Wings

Dominique Gilmore

Ashford University

Instructor: Stephen Rogers

Date: 28 Feb 2017

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1. Literary Analysis of a

Very Old Man with

Enormous Wings

Dominique Gilmore

Ashford University

Instructor: Stephen Rogers

Date: 28 Feb 2017

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[Stephen Rogers]

LITERARY ANALYSIS 2

Very Old Man with Enormous Wings

In some stories, characters come into conflict with the culture in which they live. Often, a

character feels alienated in his/her community or society due to race, gender, class or ethnic

background. In “A very old man with enormous wings” by Gabriel Garcia Marquez, the author

weaves human beings with supernatural abilities that are depicted in an unexpected twist yet

exciting way. One is left asking themselves how they would have responded if they were to be

confronted with a supernatural being.

A creative tone and a unique style are used by Marquez to create the narrative. He blends

the prosaic and repugnant parts of life extraordinarily. The elements are used to create a story

that conveys the everyday lives, yet repudiate it. The narrative invites the reader to have a close

view of the events that unfold in their lives and actuate how they respond to the prosaic they

face. The story is an inspiration for people always to take another glance at the unordinary events

that sometimes may mean something deeper. The tale is an exhibition that the blending of

mundane with extraordinariness could make a difference to life when people look at them from

the right angle.

The tone used by Marquez at the beginning of the story is natural and unwelcoming for

the occurrence that follows after that. That is; a sick child in the midst of a drab and inclement

weather (Marquez, 2004). The first sentences indicate a writing style that grabs the imaginations

of Marquez. He writes that the globe had been unhappy since Tuesday (Marquez, 2004) which

brings in an extraordinary element by introducing a dreamlike character of a senior man with

large wings. However, he immediately smashes any mindset that the reader has a powerful and

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1. The narrative invites the

reader to have a close

view of the events that

unfold in their lives and

actuate how they respond

to the prosaic they

face.

Great use of the active voice

here! The passive voice is not

as appealing to the reader as

the active voice. Active voice

sentences place the subject

doing the work, and they are

appealing to your reader

quickly indicating to them the

action happening. Sometimes

we have to use the passive

voice. For example, if we do

not know who robbed the

liquor store, we might say,

"The store was robbed."

However, we could make this

one an active voice sentence

by simply saying, "The

criminal robbed the liquor

store" which is much better

than the passive form. So, do

use active voice sentences as

much as you can for stronger

writing. [Stephen Rogers]

2. it.

Words such as "there is" or "It

is" or words such as "This,

that, these, those" are

useless in meaning and are

just filler. To provide stronger

writing, define what those

words are. Doing so gives

you a clearer piece for your

readers and you get to "beef-

up" your word count.

[Stephen Rogers]

3. That is; a sick child in the

midst of a drab and

inclement

weather

Try reading your essay out

loud. This technique can help

you to eliminate awkward

phrasing, repetition, and other

errors. For additional

assistance, use the

Grammarly tool. Visit the

'Writing Center & Library' link

in your course where you will

find the Grammar Help tab.

Use the directions found

there. [Stephen Rogers]

LITERARY ANALYSIS 3

holy angels by keeping the old man facing downwards towards the mud and not in a position to

disencumber himself by writing, “impeded by his enormous wings” Marquez, 2004). In another

part of the story, Marquez conveys a tone that has a sense of regret that humankind does not

acknowledge the power that exists as part of our lives. Rather than acknowledging an experience

and having a full life, humanity tends to have the view of what is in for them. When a couple,

Elisenda and Pelayo decide to have onlookers pay to see him just to exploit the angle (Marquez,

2004) depicts a sense of selfishness and greediness. The part of the story gives the reader a

chance to reflect and imagine what would happen if they were faced with a similar scenario.

With an impression of irony, the reader is told that each object that should have

empowered the old man to fly above elements, that is, his wings, are the ones that hindered him

and the cause of the attention he was getting. The irony is entwined through the narrative as one

can view it in the woman who was wise enough (Marquez, 2004) to determine the elderly man

with wings to be an angel and proposed beating him until he dies. The concept is also seen in the

wording of Marquez when he chooses to indicate that the husband and the wife felt as if they

were unstinting when they decided to put the angel adrift on a raft that has food that would keep

him going for a couple of days and abandon him to his destiny at the seas.

Marquez’s story also depicts a judgmental society. Although having a different

perspective is inevitable in many societies, it does not have to be at all times and in all situations.

Despite the old man being seen as an angel, he does not possess the qualities of an angel.

Marquez (2004) indicates that there were only some few hairs which are faded left on his bald

skull and countable teeth. There was nothing about the old man that measured to the appearance

of an angel. The most skeptical person was Father Gonzaga who was the town’s voice. The

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1. When a couple,

Elisenda and Pelayo decide

to have onlookers pay to

see him just to exploit the

angle (Marquez, 2004)

depicts a sense of

selfishness and greediness.

Too much retelling of the

story is not what is best in a

literary analysis. The majority

of your essay must be your

thoughts words and ideas.

And so far, I am seeing some

wonderful possibilities and

examples of this in your

narrative. Sure. You must use

source material to support

your assertions and ideas, but

more research and thought

can help you take those

original thoughts and go even

deeper in meaning for your

reader. [Stephen Rogers]

2. The irony is entwined

through the narrative as

one can view it in the

woman who was wise

enough (Marquez, 2004) to

determine the elderly man

with wings to be an angel

and proposed beating him

until he dies.

This is a good sentence! The

wording flows smoothly and

clearly. More importantly, the

sentence is simple and clear.

I tell students that just

because they are in college,

they are not necessarily

required to use fancy words

to show they are smart.

Here's the advice I can give

you: "I would rather see

sentences that are simple and

clear than sentences that are

complex and confusing."

Good work! Thanks.

[Stephen Rogers]

3. Marquez’s story also

depicts a judgmental

society. Although having a

different

perspective is inevitable in

many societies, it does not

have to be at all times and

in all situations.

You have made an insightful

analysis of the subject. Being

able to analyze material in a

critical manner helps enhance

your ideas and lends

credibility to you as a writer.

Nice job! [Stephen Rogers]

LITERARY ANALYSIS 4

people reactions showed a lack of empathy and solidarity thus depicting a judgmental

community.

In a unique way, Marquez represents an inconsistency in faith by individuals. Devotees

claim they have faith, but when it comes to the practical part of it, they fall short. Then he

noticed he was too much human (Marquez, 2004). When a magical creature appears, the people

lose interest in the senior man as the spider woman can explain his transformations.

However, at the end of the narrative, Marquez leaves the reader with some questions in

mind. How many times do people look up for a moment, see a magical thing and walk away?

How frequently do people face something amazing and fail to see what it is because of failing to

have perspectives? Magical realism in the narrative invites the reader to answer the questions by

entering a place of imagination, mystery and look into own views and actions as a way of

measuring the components of everyday life.

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1. However, at the end of

the narrative, Marquez

leaves the reader with some

questions in mind.

Here is a good place for your

opinion of the story: the

conclusion. Try to summarize

what you have said and try to

connect or "tie-in" your thesis

with the conclusion. Again, do

take a look at the sample

literary analysis and you will

see what you can do to make

a much better conclusion or

at least enhance the

conclusion you have

provided. [Stephen Rogers]

2. How many times do

people look up for a

moment, see a magical

thing and walk away?

How frequently do people

face something amazing

and fail to see what it is

because of failing to have

perspectives?

These are all good questions.

Your answer to them from

your thought and research will

provide you with an in-depth

discussion of your thesis as

well as engage your reader's

interest. Also, the answers to

your questions can be a

thesis statement as well as

help you further your

discussion for your reader.

[Stephen Rogers]

LITERARY ANALYSIS 5

Reference

Garcia'Marrquez, G. (2004). _ A Very Old Man with Enormous Wings.

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1. Reference

Please see an APA formatted

references page in the Writing

Center. We connect our in-

text citations to the references

page. From there, a reader

can then check your source

material for accuracy or to

read further about what

interests them. Also, in order

to avoid any plagiarism

issues, the references page

must be done correctly.

Finally, do check the material

in the classroom and the AU

Writing Center for help with

this page. [Stephen Rogers]