Cinderella writing paper

I read your version of the fairy tale, "Cinderella". Outside of the cat telling the story, the rest of the fairy tale is too similar to the original version. The objective of this assignment is to encourage students to use their creativity and use of imagination to change the original version of a fairy tale and re-write it differently through the minor character's perspective. Your submission talked about the wicked stepmother and the ugly sisters, which was the same as the original version. You also mentioned the ball at the court and the stepmother and sisters attending and not Cinderella, which was the same as the original version. Cinderella attends the ball at the court wearing a beautiful dress and slippers all provided by her godmother, which was the same as the original version. In the end, she marries her prince, but this part was left out of the Detailed Scenes.

The Detailed Scenes was supposed to be written in paragraph form instead of numbering the scenes. It should have read like a story. I would like for you to re-submit this fairy tale because of so many similarities to the original version. For your selection of the minor character, you could have used one of the ugly stepsisters because in the original version, it talks about the sisters as a whole and doesn't really concentrate of either of them. If you wanted to use the cat, think of how you could enhance his role to be an active participant in place of not being able to do nothing.

And this was the original directions:

Rewrite a fairy tale from the perspective of one of the minor characters in the story. Remember this is where you get to use your creativity and use of imagination to change the minor character's perspective of the story. When selecting the minor character, be careful who your minor character is, for example, if your selection was the fairy tale, "The Three Bears", your minor character would not be the Goldilocks or Baby Bear. Here is a brief example of how I changed the minor character, Papa Bear in the fairy tale, "Goldilocks and the Three Bears".