Clinical reasoning cycle essay

I noticed that there are page numbers missing in in-text citation.. can we fix that please

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umm.. i can see a lot of things thats missing references..

it seems like the writer wrote an essay without references.. the words and flow is good but references needed.. for example this one..

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There are a number of benefits that are associated with healthy lifestyle changes. First, when a person eats healthy foods, exercises and avoids taking harmful substances like excess alcohol, then one benefits from emotional, physical and mental health. As such, Beryl will not only manage to regulate her blood pressure, she shall also be in a position to maintain good weight as well as overcome the stress she is going through.

the whole paragraph has not a single reference..

it would be really nice if there was a reference after the first sentence..

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there are so many paragraphs without a single references..

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Through good bodily exercises, and healthy eating, a person is able to regulate blood pressure as well as maintain cholesterol level at a safe level.

for example this one.. it is a nice sentence but this is not really useful in marking..

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there are only one reference at the end of the paragraphs in almost all the paragraphs..

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its written well but without evidence and references.. i will struggle..

Introduction Tip: Organise ideas into an outline before writing Introduction (150 words) A good introduction outlines the content, structure and overall thesis of your essay

o Topic Sentence: Introduce the patient o Identify focus for this essay (2 problems)

o Identify interventions for this essay (4 interventions for 2 problems) and their evaluation

o Thesis Statement

Example: In treating this febrile paediatric case, the nurse has an important role in the clinical reasoning cycle to ensure improvement in the Sam’s overall condition. In this case…..

Nursing problem 1 Paragraph 1 (focus on patient problem/data) Topic Sentence identify patient problem

o Provide most relevant patient data from case study to justify the choice of priority problem

o Explain how the data is related to the problem (pathophysiology) – use references

Essay Structure: Nursing problem 1 Paragraph 2 (focus on Intervention 1) Topic Sentence (provides the key words that answer the question)

o Identify Intervention 1 to match the priority nursing problem 1

o Identify the type of intervention (independent nursing/collaborative)

o Use summaries/paraphrases of the evidence-based literature to:

• Explain what the intervention is (references)

• Explain the nurse’s responsibilities in performing the interventions (references)

• Explain why it is suitable/appropriate for that patient

o Concluding Sentence: Link patient data & evidence from references: the intervention will resolve/manage/relieve which of the patient signs/symptoms/abnormal data?

Paragraph 3 (critical discussion of intervention 1) Topic Sentence

o Discuss advantages/disadvantages/risks of intervention based on research

o Use the evidence based literature to point out benefits/risks

o Link risks/benefits to the patient’s situation/medical condition Concluding Sentence (repeat key words & emphasise why intervention is suitable for the patient.

Paragraph 4 (focus on Intervention 2) Topic Sentence (provides the key words that answer the question)

o Identify Intervention 2 to match the priority nursing problem 1

o Identify the type of intervention (independent nursing/collaborative)

o Use summaries/paraphrases of the evidence-based literature to:

• Explain what the intervention is (references)

• Explain the nurse’s responsibilities in performing the interventions (references)

• Explain why it is suitable/appropriate for that patient

o Concluding Sentence: Link patient data & evidence from references: the intervention will resolve/manage/relieve which of the patient signs/symptoms/abnormal data?

Paragraph 5 (critical discussion of intervention 2) Topic Sentence

o Discuss advantages/disadvantages/risks of intervention based on research

o Use the evidence based literature to point out benefits/risks

o Link risks/benefits to the patient’s situation/medical condition

Concluding Sentence (repeat key words & emphasise why intervention is suitable for the patient.

Paragraph 6 (Evaluation Criteria) Topic Sentence:

o Identify types of evaluation data for Nursing Problem 1 + Intervention 1 + 2

o Explain specific evaluation tools and data to show patient is improving or problem is resolved

o Link measurements to abnormal patient data from the case study (aligns with problem justification)

o Use literature to support evaluation tools and measurements

Essay Structure: Nursing problem 2 Paragraphs 7-12 Repeat the suggested pattern for nursing problem 1 when writing about nursing problem 2.

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Please follow this essay plan..

Specially paragraphs…too much paragraphs on the work i got