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Heather Lee
Dr. Eward-Mangione
ENC 1102
13 June 2017
Project Two: Final Draft
Revenge can sometimes leave people feeling unhappy and, instead of helping most
people move on, it leaves them dwelling on the situation. These four sources all conclude that the
motivation for revenge is seeking to restore their lives. The first article compares anger-driven
responses to acting on the feelings of revenge. The second annotation is of a short story in which
revenge is the dominant social issue. The short story shows readers the long-term effects that
revenge can have on both individuals. The third article compares two groups of individuals. The
revenge-seeker believes acting on feelings of revenge is fair, and the revenge-recipient believes
the act of revenge is excessive and unnecessary. The final annotation examines the impact that
the acts of revenge can have on most people.
Elshout, Maarjte, et al. “Vengeance Is Self-Focused: Comparing Vengeful to Anger-Driven
Responses.” Cognition & Emotion, vol.29, no.7, Nov.2015, pp.1239-1255. EBSCOhost,
doi.10.1080/02699931.2014.976181.
In the article “Vengeance Is Self-Focused: Comparing Vengeful to Anger-Driven
Responses,” by Maarjte Elshout, et al., the researchers examine the differences between revenge
and anger-driven responses. In this article, it states that anger is the primary emotion driving
individuals to seek revenge against another person who they feel has harmed them tremendously.
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The findings, after many case studies, reveal that “…it is not clear if and how responses fueled
by anger and responses fueled by feelings of revenge differ from each other.” (Elshout et al.
1239). In this particular study, the researchers compare; 309 workers, all of these participants
lived in the Unites States of America. They were assigned randomly to either the feelings of
revenge or to the feelings of anger. The included participants in this study, which was based on a
questionnaire, all had actually acted on their feelings of revenge or anger, at some point during
their situation. They were asked to describe a situation in which they had experienced from either
feelings of anger or revenge that stemmed from another person’s behavior toward them. The
participants were also asked to describe that situation or circumstance in detail, if possible.
Furthermore, they were asked to include the emotions they felt on the questionnaire. This study
reveals that “…revenge is self-focused and is a type of negative response with special
characteristics.” (1249). The study concludes that of all included participants, 78 percent actually
displayed negative behavior towards the person who initially offended them. The other 22
percent decided not to act on their feelings of anger. Finally, this study showed that the
individuals that acted on their feelings of revenge were found to be more willing to perform the
acts of revenge than those who were just angry responders. Researchers in this article found
revenge to be more personal and self-focused (1248). Nevertheless, they did find that many
people often agreed that acting out of revenge gives most people an emotional release and will
help a person feel better. But, in fact, based on this questionnaire, revenge was found to have the
opposite effect. The researchers discuss in the article the long-term effects of acts of revenge, in
which, there are many. The findings of this study reveal that revenge responses are not the same
as anger-driven responses.
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Poe, Edgar Allen. “The Cask of Amontillado.” Porazble Literature:Reading,Writing,Reacting.
Edited by Laurie Kirszner and Stephen Mandell, 9th edition, Cengage, 2016, pp.250-255.
The second annotation is “The Cask of Amontillado”, by Edgar Allen Poe. This is a short
story about two men, Montresor and Fortunato. Montresor forms an evil, murderous plan of
revenge against Fortunato for reasons that were never truly justified in the story. Montresor
sought revenge against Fortunato because of the injuries he had borne the best he could, “...but
when he ventured upon insult I vowed revenge” (Poe qtd. in Kirszner and Mandell 250).
Montresor, as a part of his plan, knows that Fortunato is vulnerable at this moment because of his
level of drunkenness. He lures Fortunato down to the catacombs by asking Fortunato to verify
whether or not that his cask of Amontillado is authentic (251). After arriving down at the
catacombs, Montresor proceeds to chain Fortunato to the wall and entombs him inside by
surrounding him with brick and mortar, which kills Fortunato. Montresor’s act of revenge is
carried out exactly according to his plan. Montresor feels no remorse and continues on with his
life as if nothing had happened.
Stillwell, Arlene M.et al. “We’re All Victims Here: Toward a Psychology of Revenge.” Basic &
Applied Social Psychology, vol.30, no.3, Jul-Sept 2008, pp.253-263. EBSCOhost, doi:
10.1080/01973530802375094.
“We’re All Victims Here: Toward a Psychology of Revenge,” by Arlene M. Stillwell et
al., is an article that discusses the two different studies performed and the results that were
concluded. These studies were done to shed light on this recurrent problem of revenge in human
conflict. The researchers argued that revenge is “....an aggressive act that is often justified by the
pursuit of equity” (Stillwell et al. 253). The authors also discuss the fact that many believe
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revenge is fascinating to study because “…many of those who have suffered injustices would
probably welcome the opportunity to gain revenge on the people who harmed them-assuming, of
course, that further retaliation would not follow.” (253). Study One compare incidents of revenge
from both perspectives, the avenger (revenge-seeker) and the revenge-recipient. The prediction
of the researchers’, that equity restoration was a motivation for revenge, was supported (257).
They concluded, “Study One found that both avengers and recipients viewed themselves as
victims, but they were also willing to accept some measure of blame for the situation, as well as
to justify their actions.” (257). In Study Two, the participants shared either an event with
researchers’, in which, they were angered and then sought revenge on another, or shared a
situation when they were angered but did not seek revenge (258). Responses to a questionnaire
served as the primary data for analysis. In this study, the non-revenge seekers noted that they did
not seek revenge because “…it would not have been an effective strategy for the situation, or
they cited ethical or moral reasons for their decisions.” (259). Researchers concluded that
avengers, for the most part, seek to harm the person who harmed them, but by no means, is
justice achieved when this happens (260). Many researchers in this article agree that, equity
might be difficult to achieve when revenge is being sought. Also, they also agree that when
people are hurt they may try to restore equity by seeking revenge. In these studies, from the
perspective of the revenge-seeker, they all agreed that their actions were justified. Nevertheless,
both studies focused on whether or not, restoring equity by seeking revenge is necessary. A great
example of revenge, used in this article, is the famous, long-standing feud between the Hatfield
family and the McCoy family (262). Even in one of the longest running and bloodiest feuds,
eventually came to a peaceful end in 2000. These findings, conclude that, there is a solution
possible without having to act on feelings of revenge.
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“The Impact of Revenge.” Psychologist, vol.30, Mar.2017, p.15, EBSCOhost, db11.linccweb.
org/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=121408
839&site=ehost-live.
The final annotation, “The Impact of Revenge”, is an article that has been featured on the
Research Digest blog and has received international media interest. “The Impact of Revenge”,
was written based on Dr. David Chester and Dr. C. Nathan DeWall’s work. It was initially
published in the Journal of Personality and Social Psychology. The researchers’ saw 156
participants who received fake negative or positive feedback on essays they had written.
Participants in the negative feedback group were allowed to carry out revenge using a voodoo
doll to symbolize the instructor that gave the negative feedback (“The Impact of Revenge”, 15).
After following through on acts of revenge, the participants’ mood was fully restored and
comparable to the mood in the positive feedback group (15). Dr. Chester concludes that maybe
seemingly pointless aggression can have a purpose. Chester stated, “Revenge is the most
common form of aggressive behavior and a massive cause of harm to humankind.” (15). The
researchers wanted to get a better understanding as to why people hurt each other and how
professionals can prevent it through therapy. This research performed had a huge impact on the
visibility of Dr. Chester and DeWall’s findings. Nevertheless, learning all of this information
from the questionnaire, Chester said, “People want to understand the reasons behind their own
behaviors and the behaviors of others.” (15). Dr. Chester hopes that professionals will be able to
help those who display a tendency to seek revenge.
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Works Cited
Elshout, Maarjte, et al. “Vengeance Is Self-Focused: Comparing Vengeful to Anger-Driven
Responses.” Cognition & Emotion, vol.29, no.7, Nov.2015, pp.1239-1255. EBSCOhost,
doi:10.1080/02699931.2014.976181.
“Impact of Revenge.” Psychologist, vol.30, Mar.2017, p.15, EBSCOhost, db11.linccweb.
org/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=121408
839&site=ehost-live.
Poe, Edgar Allen. “The Cask of Amontillado.” Portable Literature: Reading, Writing, Reacting,
Edited by Laurie Kirszner and Stephen Mandell, 9th edition, Cengage, 2016, pp.250-255.
Stillwell, Arlene M., et al. “We’re All Victims Here: Toward a Psychology of Revenge.” Basic&
Applied Social Psychology, vol.30, no.3, Jul-Sept2008, pp.253-263. EBSCOhost, doi:
10.1080/01973530802375094.