Deborah brandt sponsors of literacy

What is writing?
What is true about writing?
What is the purpose of writing?
What is your overall impression of or attitude toward writing?
What does it mean to be a writer?
Are you a writer?
What makes for good writing?
What are the rules of writing?
What is easy and/or difficult about writing?
Include the total word count of your response with your entry. Include only your response, and not the prompt itself, in your word count.

After reading Chapter 1, reread your response to Writer’s Journal 1, then answer, with 200-600 words, the following questions:
What from your first journal entry response, if anything, would change now that you have read Chapter 1 of our textbook?
Which ideas from Chapter 1 were interesting, revealing, or helpful for you to consider?

Include the total word count of your response with your entry. Include only your response, and not the prompt itself, in your word count.

Want help with the readings in Writing about Writing?

Elizabeth Wardle and Doug Downs have created helpful Assist Tags to help you get the most from each reading. Look at pages 58–59 for more details on each tag.

CARS: Territory Look Ahead CARS: Niche Reread CARS: Occupy Read Later Conversation Speed Up Extending Forecasting Framework Making Knowledge Research Question So What?

Look at these readings to see the tags at work:

Chapter 2 — Deborah Brandt, “Sponsors of Literacy” (p. 68)

Chapter 3 — James Paul Gee, “Literacy, Discourse, and Linguistics: Introduction” (p. 274)

Chapter 4 — Keith Grant-Davie, “Rhetorical Situations and Their Constituents” (p. 484)

Chapter 5 — Sondra Perl, “The Composing Processes of Unskilled College Writers” (p. 738)

Then try using the tags yourself as you read the other selections in Writing about Writing.

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WRITING ABOUT WRITING A College Reader

THIRD EDITION

WRITING ABOUT WRITING A College Reader

ELIZABETH WARDLE Miami University

DOUG DOWNS Montana State University

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PREFACE FOR INSTRUCTORS

Writing about Writing is part of a movement that continues to grow. As composition instructors, we have always focused on teaching students how writing works and on helping them develop ways of thinking that would enable them to succeed as writers in college. We found ourselves increasingly frustrated, however, teaching traditional composition courses based on topics that had nothing to do with writing. It made far more sense to us to have students really engage with writing in the writing course; the best way to do this, we decided, was to adopt a “writing about writing” approach, introducing students directly to what writing researchers have learned about writing and challenging them to respond by writing and doing research of their own. After years of experimenting with readings and assignments, and watching our colleagues do the same, we developed Writing about Writing, a textbook for first-year composition students that presents the subjects of composition, discourse, and literacy as its content. Here’s why we think Writing about Writing is a smart choice for composition courses.

Writing about Writing engages students in a relevant subject.

One of the major goals of the writing course, as we see it, is to move students’ ideas about language and writing from the realm of the automatic and unconscious to the forefront of their thinking. In conventional composition courses, students are too often asked to write about an arbitrary topic unrelated to writing. In our experience, when students are asked to read and interact with academic scholarly conversations about writing and test their opinions through their own research, they become more engaged with the goals of the writing course and — most important — they learn more about writing.

Writing about Writing engages students’ own areas of expertise.

By the time they reach college, students are expert language users with multiple literacies: They are experienced student writers, and they’re engaged in many other discourses as well — blogging, texting, instant messaging, posting to social networking sites like Facebook and Snapchat, and otherwise using language and writing on a daily basis. Writing about Writing asks students to work from their own experience to consider how writing works, who they are as writers, and how they use (and don’t use) writing. Students might wonder, for example, why they did so poorly on the SAT writing section or why some groups of people use writing that is so specialized it seems intended to leave others out.

This book encourages students to discover how others — including Sondra Perl, Deborah Brandt, James Paul Gee, their instructors, and their classmates — have answered these questions and then to find out more by doing meaningful research of their own.

Writing about Writing helps students transfer what they learn.

Teachers often assume that students can automatically and easily “apply” what they learn in a writing course to all their other writing — or at the very least, to other college writing. This assumption sees writing and reading as “basic” universal skills that work the same regardless of situation. Yet research on transfer of learning suggests that there is nothing automatic about it: Learning transfer researchers David Perkins and Gavriel Salomon found that in order to transfer knowledge, students need to explicitly create general principles based on their own experience and learning; to be self-reflective, so that they keep track of what they are thinking and learning as they do it; and to be mindful — that is, alert to their surroundings and to what they are doing rather than just doing things automatically and unconsciously. A writing course that takes language, writing, reading, and literacy as its subjects can help students achieve these goals by teaching them to articulate general principles such as “Carefully consider what your audience needs and wants this document to do.” In addition, it teaches them to reflect on their own reading, writing, and research processes.

Writing about Writing has been extensively class tested — and it works.

The principles of this writing-about-writing approach have been well tested and supported by the experience of writing instructors and thousands of students across the country. Writing about Writing was formally class tested in a pilot at the University of Central Florida, an experiment that yielded impressive outcomes in comparative portfolio assessment with more traditional composition courses. Assessment results suggest, among other things, that the writing-about-writing approach had a statistically significant impact on higher-order thinking skills — rhetorical analysis, critical thinking about ideas, and using and integrating the ideas of others. The writing-about-writing approach also had a significant impact on how students and teachers engaged in writing as a process. The first and second editions of Writing about Writing were used in a variety of composition programs across the country, and based on positive feedback from those users, we have even greater confidence that this approach — and this third edition — is successful.

Features of Writing about Writing FRAMED AROUND THRESHOLD CONCEPTS ABOUT WRITING

Writing about Writing is organized around concepts and principles from Writing Studies with which we think students should become familiar; we identify these as “threshold concepts,” and we spend the entire first chapter discussing them in detail, and engaging students in activities to think about how they apply to their lives. Threshold concepts are concepts that learners must become acquainted with in order to progress in that area of study — they are gateways to learning. Naming and using threshold concepts is an approach that has been used in the United Kingdom and now increasingly in the United States and other countries to improve teaching and learning in various disciplines and programs, including Writing Studies (for example, see the 2015 publication Naming What We Know: Threshold Concepts of Writing Studies). Because they are central to work in a particular field but are often assumed and unstated, threshold concepts when explicitly identified can better help students come to understand ideas that are central to that field or phenomenon. Researchers Ray Land and Jan (Erik) Meyer have argued that threshold concepts are

often troublesome and can conflict with common knowledge about a phenomenon. We think that this is particularly true when it comes to writing. Much of what we have learned as a field about writing conflicts with commonly held assumptions about writing. For example, many people believe that “good writers” are people for whom writing is easy, while research about writing suggests that “good writers” are people who persist, revise, and are willing to learn from their failures. Threshold concepts are the organizing theme for the third edition of Writing about

Writing, and we’ve arranged them in a sequence that we believe assists understanding of each subsequent concept:

Chapter 1, “Threshold Concepts: Why Do Your Ideas about Writing Matter?” introduces and defines threshold concepts and describes some central concepts about writing that conflict with common ideas of writing in popular culture.

Chapter 2, “Literacies: How Is Writing Impacted by Our Prior Experiences?” engages the threshold concept that our prior experiences deeply impact our writing and literacy practices, or in simpler terms, that our reading and writing past will shape our reading and writing present.

Chapter 3, “Individual in Community: How Does Writing Help People Get Things Done?” engages the threshold concept that people use texts and discourse in order to do something, to make meaning. And the texts and language they create mediate meaningful activities. People construct meaning through texts and language, and texts construct meaning as people use them.

Chapter 4, “Rhetoric: How Is Meaning Constructed in Context?” explores the threshold concepts that writing helps people make meaning and get things done, that “good” writing is dependent on writers, readers, situation, technology, and use, and

therefore that there are always constraints on writing.

Chapter 5, “Processes: How Are Texts Composed?” engages several threshold concepts about writing, including that writing is a process, all writers have more to learn, and writing is not perfectible.

CHALLENGING AND ENGAGING READINGS

Because our intention in putting this book together was to invite students directly into scholarly conversations about writing, most readings in the book are articles by rhetoric and composition scholars. We looked for work that was readable by undergraduates, relevant to student experience, effective in modeling how to research and write about writing, and useful for helping students frame and analyze writing-related issues. We drew not only on our own experience with students but also on feedback from a nationwide network of faculty using writing-about-writing approaches to composition and on the feedback of teachers who used the first two editions of the book. The articles in this edition expose students to some of the longest-standing questions and some of the most interesting work in our field, encouraging them to wrestle with concepts we’re all trying to figure out. Of course, we don’t expect first-year students to read these texts like graduate students

or scholars would — that is, with a central focus on the content of the readings, for the purposes of critiquing them and extending their ideas. Instead, we intend for them to be used as springboards to exploration of students’ own writing and reading experiences. The readings — and thus this book — are not the center of the course; instead, they help students develop language and ideas for thinking through the threshold concepts identified above, and begin exploring them by considering their own experiences with writing, discourse, and literacy, and their (and the field’s) open questions. While most readings are scholarly, we include a number of other sorts of texts

throughout this edition. There are new pieces written directly for the student readers of this book, including Chapter 1, with readings on genre theory and rhetorical reading written by us, and an introduction to rhetoric by Doug Downs and a discussion of document design and social justice written by Natasha Jones and Stephanie Wheeler (both in Chapter 4); short pieces by fiction and nonfiction writers (including Anne Lamott, Sandra Cisneros, Barbara Mellix, and Malcolm X); and a research report by the Writing in Digital Environments (WIDE) Research Group led by Jeff Grabill and Bill Hart-Davidson. These readings, combined with the others in the book, help students approach the threshold concepts about writing from a variety of perspectives.

REAL STUDENT WRITING

Writing about Writing also includes student voices, with eight pieces of student writing. We

have continued to draw from Young Scholars in Writing, the national peer-reviewed journal of undergraduate research in Writing Studies and rhetoric, and from Stylus, the University of Central Florida Writing Program’s peer-reviewed first-year student publication. Given their nature as reprinted scholarly articles, we have treated the student essays the same as we have treated the professional essays: They are framed and introduced and accompanied by questions and activities. We want the students who use this book to see other students as participants in the ongoing conversations about writing; we hope this will enable them to see themselves as potential contributors to these conversations. This time around, rather than placing all the student readings at the end of the chapter, we have integrated them into the chapters where we thought they best fit into the conversation.

SCAFFOLDED SUPPORT FOR LEARNING

The material presented in this book is challenging. We’ve found that students need guidance in order to engage with it constructively, and many instructors appreciate support in teaching it. Therefore, we’ve scaffolded the material in ways that help make individual readings more accessible to students and that help them build toward mastery of often complex rhetorical concepts.

The book begins with a chapter written directly to a student audience. Chapter 1 not only explains the purpose of the book, but explains why and how the book is organized around threshold concepts of Writing Studies and provides extended explanation of these concepts. This chapter also provides an introduction to genre theory and rhetorical reading in order to help students engage in the readings of this book (and the rest of their college experience). We outline some reading strategies and an overview of John Swales’s CARS model of research introductions to assist with this. There you will also find a reading by Stuart Greene that asks students to think about this class and book as inquiry, and a reading by Richard Straub that helps prepare students for responding to each other’s writing. Reflective activities throughout the chapter as well as sections of reading support and tips on “Using This Book” — including a descriptive guide to the Reading Assist Tags feature — prepare students to engage with Writing about Writing.

Chapters 2–5 begin with a chapter introduction that explains the chapter’s threshold concepts, summarizes the chapter’s content and goals, and overviews each reading and its central ideas by placing it in the larger conversation at play within the chapter. These introductions are robust discussions of background knowledge and principles that help students better approach the threshold concepts the chapter includes.

Each reading begins with a Framing the Reading section offering background on the author and the text as well as Getting Ready to Read suggestions for activities to do before reading and questions to ask during reading.

Each reading is followed by two sets of questions: Questions for Discussion and Journaling, which can be used in class or for homework, and Applying and Exploring Ideas, which recommends medium-scale reading-related writing activities (both individual and group). A Meta Moment concludes the post-reading question set and asks students to reflect on the selection’s ideas in the context of the chapter’s threshold concept and of their own writing experiences. These questions and activities are designed to make teachers’ jobs easier by providing a variety of prompts that have been class tested by others.

Each chapter ends with the Writing Assignments section. Building on one or more of the readings from the chapter, assignments are designed to help students achieve the goals outlined in the chapter introduction. Though these assignments hardly scratch the surface of what’s possible, these have proven to be favorites with us, our students, and other teachers.

The book includes a glossary of technical terms in composition that students will encounter in their readings. Terms in the glossary, such as rhetorical situation and discourse, are noted in the chapter and reading introductions via bold print.

A note on citation styles.

While the selection introductions reflect current MLA style from the eighth edition of the MLA Handbook (2016) in citation and documentation, other material in the book, all previously published, remains written in the citation styles used by the journals and books in which they were originally published, current at those times. This means you should expect to see a great deal of variation from current MLA, APA, CMS, or journal-specific style guidelines — a decision that we hope will provide instructors with an excellent starting point for conversation about how citation actually works in the “real world” of academic publication over time.

New to the Third Edition DIVERSE AND RELEVANT NEW READINGS

The third edition features eight new professional essays. Selections by authors such as Sandra Cisneros (“Only Daughter”), popular in many first-year writing courses, are offered through a writing-about-writing lens to promote and understand literacy. Now integrated throughout Chapters 2–5, readings on multimodality and on technology in writing, such as Jim Ridolfo and Dànielle Nicole DeVoss’s “Composing for Recomposition: Rhetorical Velocity and Delivery” and Stacey Pigg’s “Coordinating Constant Invention: Social Media’s Role in Distributed Work,” relate to our evolving conceptions of writing in a networked and

digital age. Other notable new additions include Vershawn Ashanti Young’s “‘Naw, We Straight’: An Argument Against Code Switching”; James M. Corder’s “Argument as Emergence, Rhetoric as Love”; and Liane Robertson, Kara Taczak, and Kathleen Blake Yancey’s “Notes toward a Theory of Prior Knowledge.” Six of the eight student essays in this edition are also new. Now dispersed through each

chapter to show the importance and relevance of students’ engagement with Writing Studies, these student texts present topics relevant to students today: explorations of literacy by rejecting labels of “remedial” writing (Arturo Tejada, Jr. et al.), rhetorical analyses of social media and library catalog pages (Komysha Hassan), studies of bilingual writing processes (Lucas Pasqualin and Alcir Santos Neto), and more.

A MORE ACCESSIBLE AND TEACHABLE INTRODUCTION TO THRESHOLD CONCEPTS, GENRE, AND RHETORICAL READING

The new Chapter 1, “Threshold Concepts: Why Do Your Ideas about Writing Matter?,” explains the ideas and rationale of the writing-about-writing approach to students directly. Students are introduced to the threshold concepts that frame the chapters in Writing about Writing with relatable examples and conversational language. A new section introduces genre and rhetorical reading as threshold concepts that assist academic reading and writing, providing a foundation for students as they engage with articles of Writing Studies scholarship. The Write Reflectively and Try Thinking Differently activities get students writing and thinking actively about each threshold concept, and Questions for Discussion and Journaling and Applying and Exploring Ideas allow students to reflect on the entire chapter and their conceptions of writing from the beginning of the course.

READING ASSIST TAGS

Chapters 2–5 each present one foundational or challenging selection as a Tagged Reading. These selections feature two types of Reading Assist Tags: Genre Cues to help students see and understand genre conventions and rhetorical moves, and Reading Cues such as “Look Ahead” and “Reread” to help students find and understand the key points of each article. A fresh design color-codes the two different tags and provides extended commentary for each cue below the main text, but remains in the margins to allow annotation and flexibility for working with the readings. A two-page chart in Chapter 1 (pages 58–59) explains each tag’s meaning and function and serves as a useful reference for students throughout the course.

AN UPDATED GLOSSARY

New and revised glossary terms such as ecology, embodiment, and velocity present more coverage of key concepts of writing, both the concepts presented in this edition’s reading selections as well as terminology from the evolving field of Writing Studies.

ECOLOGY An ecology is, literally, the interactions among groups of living things and their environments (and the scientific study of those interactions). More broadly, “ecology” has come to refer to any network of relationships among beings and their material surroundings. In rhetorical terms, ecology refers to the web of relationships and interactions between all the rhetors and all the material in a rhetorical situation. Like other meanings of ecology, it is difficult to define the boundaries of a rhetorical ecology because elements in an ecology will also connect to elements outside the ecology.

EMBODIED, EMBODIMENT Rhetorical interaction happens with, to, and by beings with material bodies. The term embodiment reminds us that such interaction is contingent on the bodies that give it shape. It is easy to assume that rhetorical interaction is simply ideas worked on mentally apart from bodies; when we look for how rhetorical interaction is embodied, we remember that the interaction depends on material bodies as well as ideas.

VELOCITY Based on the term from physics meaning movement at some rate in some direction, rhetorical theorists use velocity to describe how a text “moves” or is transformed through time and space. A text may be written into new forms or taken to new places. Analysis of velocity attends to both direction — where the text “goes” or how it is transformed — and rate — how quickly the transformation takes place. The concept of velocity is available not just to analysts but to rhetors themselves, who can compose and inscribe a text with a specific velocity in mind to begin with.

NEW IDEAS FOR WRITING ASSIGNMENTS

This edition features seven new Writing Assignments, now designed to be more clearly visible at the end of each chapter. These engaging projects are class-tested favorites that respond to the concepts presented in the new reading selections and include a challenge to students to explore their conceptions about writing, reading, and research; a reflection on gaining authority in new discourse communities; and an analysis of rhetorical velocity in social media.

MORE SUPPORT IN THE INSTRUCTOR’S EDITION OF WRITING ABOUT WRITING

Some teachers won’t need any supplements at all, including the discussion questions and major assignment options. But we have designed the book to be as accessible and supportive as possible to composition instructors with a wide range of experience, including new graduate students and very busy adjuncts. Toward that end, we provide a revised instructor’s resource manual written by Matt Bryan, which builds on the previous two editions written by Deborah Weaver and Lindee Owens. All three of these instructors are teacher-trainers at the University of Central Florida, who themselves piloted an early

version of this book and taught the material in it to a number of other composition teachers there. This material, bound together with the student text in a special Instructor’s Edition, includes the following:

frequently asked questions

sample course calendars

chapter overviews

lists of key vocabulary for each chapter

key student outcomes for each chapter

a list of readings that can help teach key student outcomes

summaries and take-home points for each reading

supplemental activities that help teach to each outcome

The manual is also available for download on the instructor’s resources tab on the catalog page for Writing about Writing at macmillanlearning.com.

Acknowledgments We came to writing-about-writing independently of one another, in different ways, and became better at it as a result of working together. David Russell was a mentor for us both. Elizabeth came to writing-about-writing as a result of her dissertation research, which Russell chaired and supported. Doug came to it as a result of questions about building better research pedagogy, directly fueled by Russell’s work on the history of college research-writing instruction and his chapter in Joseph Petraglia’s Reconceiving Writing. Initially, Elizabeth’s interest was theoretical (“this might be an interesting idea”) while Doug’s was quite practical (he designed and studied a writing-about-writing class for his dissertation). We discovered each other’s common interest through dialog on the WPA-L listserv, two independent clauses and a long-term collaboration was born. It is fair to say that neither of us would have written this book without the other, as we both seem to get a lot more done when working collaboratively. (We remember vividly two hours in the sunshine at the University of Delaware, at the 2004 WPA conference, when we took our first steps at figuring out collaboration.) So, if it’s not too corny, we would like to acknowledge collaboration in general, our collaboration in particular, and tenure and promotion systems at our institutions that have recognized collaborative work for the valid, challenging, and rewarding process it is. To many, many people — colleagues, mentors, and friends — we owe a deep debt of

gratitude for putting the ideas grounding Writing about Writing “in the air.” In addition, over

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the five years that it took to build the first edition of this book, and the three years we planned and wrote the second edition, and in the year and a half it took to write the third edition, we met many wonderful teacher-scholars who inspired us to keep going. Over many dinners, SIGs, conference panels, e-mail discussions, and drinks, we learned and are still learning a lot from them. A partial list of people who helped us start on this path or rethink it and make it better includes Linda Adler-Kassner, Anis Bawarshi, Barb Bird, Shannon Carter, Dana Driscoll, Heidi Estrem, Michelle LaFrance, Moriah McCracken, Susan McLeod, Laurie McMillan, Michael Michaud, Michael Murphy, Sarah Read, Jan Rieman, David Russell, Betsy Sargent, Jody Shipka, David Slomp, Susan Thomas, Jennifer Wells, Kathi Yancey, and Leah Zuidema. Each of us is also deeply indebted to the wonderful teachers, scholars, and students at

our own institutions who have worked with this curriculum and pushed our thinking on what is possible in a writing-about-writing classroom. At UCF, some of these people include Matt Bryan, Angela Rounsaville, Debbie Weaver, Lindee Owens, Mark Hall, Dan Martin, Matt McBride, Adele Richardson, Nichole Stack, Mary Tripp, and Thomas Wright. At Montana State, some of these people include Jean Arthur, Jess Carroll, Glen Chamberlain, Jill Davis, ZuZu Feder, Jake Henan, Kimberly Hoover, Katie Jo LaRiviere, Miles Nolte, Ashley Rives, Kiki Rydell, Mark Schlenz, and Aaron Yost. Many of these people are now on the FYC as Writing Studies listserv; members of the

Writing about Writing Network founded by Betsy Sargent; participants in or leaders of the CCCC standing group, the Writing about Writing Development Group; or contributors to a forthcoming edited collection of research on the approach edited by Doug Downs, Moriah McCracken, Barb Bird, and Jan Rieman. Through such interaction, they continue to develop research projects, create conference presentations and workshops, and inspire us — and one another — with their curricular creativity. Writing-about-writing students have also been given a national platform to publish their work, thanks to the editorial board of the national, peer-reviewed undergraduate journal of Writing Studies, Young Scholars in Writing. Editor Laurie Grobman created a First-year Writing Feature (continued as the Spotlight on First-year Writing under the editorship of Jane Greer) co-edited over time by Shannon Carter, Doug Downs, David Elder, Heidi Estrem, Patti Hanlon-Baker, Holly Ryan, Heather Bastian, and Angela Glotfelter. We are grateful to those instructors who gave us valuable feedback as we worked on

this new edition: Rebecca Day Babcock, University of Texas–Permain Basin; Matthew Bryan, University of Central Florida; Ellen C. Carillo, University of Connecticut; Colin Charlton, University of Texas–Pan American; Jonikka Charlton, University of Texas–Pan American; Geoffrey Clegg, Arkansas State University; E. Dominguez Barajas, University of Arkansas; Dana Driscoll, Oakland University; Carolyn Fitzpatrick, University of Maryland; Alanna Frost, University of Alabama, Huntsville; Gina Hanson, California State University; Krystal Hering, Des Moines Area Community College; Kim Hoover, Montana State

University; Michael D. Johnson, Ohio University; Joseph Jones, University of Memphis; Erik Juergensmeyer, Fort Lewis College; Jessica Kester, Daytona State College; Cat Mahaffey, University of North Carolina–Charlotte; Jill McCracken, University of South Florida–St. Petersburg; Janine Morris, University of Cincinnati; Melissa Nicolas, University of Nevada; Miles Nolte, Montana State University; Juli Parrish, University of Denver; Pegeen Reichert Powell, Columbia College; Rhonda Powers, University of Memphis; Sarah Read, DePaul University; Jan Rieman, University of North Carolina–Charlotte; Gregory Robinson, Nevada State College; Kevin Roozen, University of Central Florida; Albert Rouzie, Ohio University; John H. Whicker, Fontbonne University; Gail York, Appalachian State University; Sarah Zurhellen, Appalachian State University. We owe a massive thank you to Bedford/St. Martin’s, and to Leasa Burton and Joan

Feinberg in particular, who had the vision to believe that this book might really find an audience if they published it. To all the Bedford crew who made it real the first time and improved it the second and third times, we are deeply grateful. We are grateful to John Sullivan, our second edition editor, who unfailingly believed (and continues to believe) in our ideas and vision, and encouraged others to trust us when our ideas might not immediately seem possible; his mentorship and advocacy on the second edition helped push this book to a new place. This third go-round, Leah Rang had the unenviable task of corralling us along the revision path while we struggled with many other competing commitments. To her we owe the follow-through to make the reading assist tags and improved design a reality. Ultimately, our students deserve the most acknowledgment. They have inspired us to

keep teaching writing about writing. They have demonstrated that the focus is one that continues to excite and motivate, and their ideas continue to inspire and teach us.

ELIZABETH WARDLE

DOUG DOWNS

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A video introduction to many topics. Introductions offer an overview of the unit’s topic, and many include a brief, accessible video to illustrate the concepts at hand.

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ABOUT THE AUTHORS

Elizabeth Wardle is Howe Professor of English and Director of the Roger and Joyce Howe Center for Writing Excellence at Miami University (OH). She was Chair of the Department of Writing and Rhetoric at the University of Central Florida (UCF), and Director of Writing Programs at UCF and University of Dayton. These experiences fed her interest in how students learn and repurpose what they know in new settings. With Linda Adler-Kassner, she is co-editor of Naming What We Know: Threshold Concepts of Writing Studies, winner of the WPA Award for Outstanding Contribution to the Discipline (2016).

Doug Downs is Associate Professor of Writing Studies as well as Director of the Core Writing Program in the Department of English at Montana State University (Bozeman). His interests are in writing, research, and reading instruction at the college level, especially related to first-year composition and undergraduate research. He is currently editor of Young Scholars in Writing, the national peer-reviewed journal of undergraduate research on writing and rhetoric. His most recent research projects focus on students’ reading practices in an age of screen-based literacy, and on learning transfer from first-year writing courses to students’ writing in their majors.

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CONTENTS

Preface for Instructors v About the Authors xix

CHAPTER 1 Threshold Concepts: Why Do Your Ideas about Writing Matter?

1

INTRODUCTION TO THE CONVERSATION 1 Why Study Writing? 2 Two Stories about Writing 3 Conceptions: With Our Thoughts We Make the World 5

THRESHOLD CONCEPTS OF WRITING 6 Writing Is Not Just Something People Do, But Something People Study 7

Writing Is Impacted by Prior Experiences 8

Writing Helps People Make Meaning and Get Things Done, But There Are Always Constraints 10

“Good” Writing Is Dependent on Writers, Readers, Situation, Technology, and Use 12

Writing Is a Process, All Writers Have More to Learn, and Writing Is Not Perfectible 15

THRESHOLD CONCEPTS THAT ASSIST ACADEMIC READING AND WRITING 16 Genres: Writing Responds to Repeating Situations through Recognizable Forms

17

Genre Features of Scholarly Articles: John Swales’s, “Create a Research Space” (CARS) Model of Research Introductions 21

Rhetorical Reading: Texts Are People Talking 24

A DIFFERENT KIND OF RESEARCH, ARGUMENT, AND READING 30

STUART GREENE, Argument as Conversation: The Role of Inquiry in

Writing a Researched Argument 31

Explains how scholarly inquiry is a different kind of research and argument from the kinds we encounter in our daily lives or often even in early schooling.

RICHARD STRAUB, Responding — Really Responding — to Other Students’ Writing 44

Provides advice on how to respond effectively to peer writing.

USING THIS BOOK 56 Getting the Most out of Your Readings 56 Reading Assist Tags 57

ASSIST TAGS GUIDE 58

REFLECTING ON THE IDEAS OF CHAPTER 1 60

WRITING ABOUT THRESHOLD CONCEPTS: MAJOR WRITING ASSIGNMENT 62

Challenging and Exploring Your Conceptions about Writing, Reading, and Research 62

CHAPTER 2 Literacies: How Is Writing Impacted by Our Prior Experiences?

64

DEBORAH BRANDT, Sponsors of Literacy [TAGGED READING] 68

Analyzes the idea of literacy sponsorship and demonstrates its application across various case studies.

SANDRA CISNEROS, Only Daughter 101

Illustrates the notion of literacy sponsorship with a short narration about her struggle to gain her father’s approval for her writing.

MALCOLM X, Learning to Read 106

Narrates how and why he learned to read in prison, and the impact of his early life on his literate learning.

VICTOR VILLANUEVA, Excerpt from Bootstraps: From an American Academic of Color 116

Describes his own literate experiences and how they are intertwined with his cultural background.

ARTURO TEJADA, JR., ESTHER GUTIERREZ, BRISA GALINDO, DESHONNA

WALLACE, AND SONIA CASTANEDA, Challenging Our Labels: Rejecting the Language of Remediation [FIRST-YEAR STUDENT TEXT] 130

A collaborative project by five students placed in a remedial writing course and labeled “not yet proficient” writers, in which they use what they learned in their first-year writing course to challenge their school’s harmful labeling practices.

VERSHAWN ASHANTI YOUNG, “Nah, We Straight”: An Argument Against Code Switching 148

Argues that teaching students to code switch between “standard” English and their “home” Englishes creates a kind of linguistic segregation that suggests some languages and, by extension, some identities are inferior to others.

BARBARA MELLIX, From Outside, In 172

Shows the many ways identity is enmeshed with language, recounting how Mellix’s current experience of writing is shaped by her past experiences in particular places and times.

LIANE ROBERTSON, KARA TACZAK, AND KATHLEEN BLAKE YANCEY, Notes toward a Theory of Prior Knowledge 184

Explores how people use knowledge they previously learned in order to succeed in new situations — a key aspect of “transferring” knowledge from one situation to another.

NANCY SOMMERS, I Stand Here Writing 212

A short study in invention, as Sommers writes her thought processes in tracing where ideas, and ideas for how to say those ideas, come from.

DONALD M. MURRAY, All Writing Is Autobiography 223

Argues that all forms of writing include the writer, even apparently objective or scientific forms.

LUCAS PASQUALIN, “Don’t Panic: A Hitchhiker’s Guide to My Literacy” [FIRST-YEAR STUDENT TEXT] 236

A student’s literacy narrative, focusing on the literacy sponsorship of books and family in his bilingual literacy formation.

JEFF GRABILL, WILLIAM HART-DAVIDSON, STACEY PIGG, MICHAEL McLEOD, PAUL CURRAN, JESSIE MOORE, PAULA ROSINSKI, TIM PEEPLES, SUZANNE RUMSEY, MARTINE COURANT RIFE, ROBYN TASAKA, DUNDEE LACKEY, AND BETH BRUNK-CHAVEZ, Revisualizing Composition: Mapping the Writing Lives of First-Year College Students 245

Report on how college students experience, use, and value new writing technologies and environments in the larger context of their writing lives.

WRITING ABOUT LITERACIES: WRITING ASSIGNMENTS 262 Literacy Narrative 262 Group Analysis of Literacy History 264 Linguistic Observation and Analysis 267

CHAPTER 3 Individual in Community: How Does Writing Help People Get Things Done? 270

JAMES PAUL GEE, Literacy, Discourse, and Linguistics: Introduction [TAGGED READING] 274

Introduces the concepts of dominant, nondominant, primary, and secondary Discourses in order to discuss how people are socialized through language.

TONY MIRABELLI, Learning to Serve: The Language and Literacy of Food Service Workers 298

Draws on theories about language in communities in order to examine how workers and patrons in a diner interact through language and texts.

ANN M. JOHNS, Discourse Communities and Communities of Practice: Membership, Conflict, and Diversity 319

Explains the concept of discourse communities and focuses on how and why conflicts occur in them, particularly in academic communities.

PERRI KLASS, Learning the Language 343

Demonstrates how groups of people such as medical professionals use language and texts in specialized ways as they work to accomplish their goals together.

LUCILLE P. McCARTHY, A Stranger in Strange Lands: A College Student Writing across the Curriculum 348

Follows an undergraduate student, Dave, through three different classes in order to understand how he approaches and understands writing tasks in different settings.

SEAN BRANICK, Coaches Can Read, Too: An Ethnographic Study of a Football Coaching Discourse Community [FIRST-YEAR STUDENT TEXT]

383

Analyzes coaching interviews and speeches in order to argue that football coaches constitute a discourse community that entails complex textual, interpersonal, and situational literacies.

DONNA KAIN AND ELIZABETH WARDLE, Activity Theory: An Introduction for the Writing Classroom 395

Presents a brief overview of activity theory appropriate for undergraduate students, and describes how activity theory can be used to analyze texts as they mediate activity in different contexts.

ELIZABETH WARDLE, Identity, Authority, and Learning to Write in New Workplaces 407

Describes the struggle an employee faces as he tries to communicate in a new workplace setting. Uses activity theory to analyze some of his communicative failures.

VICTORIA MARRO, The Genres of Chi Omega: An Activity Analysis [FIRST- YEAR STUDENT TEXT] 426

Draws on activity theory and genre theory to analyze how a sorority’s genres are used across chapters in order to further the goals of the organization.

WRITING ABOUT INDIVIDUALS IN COMMUNITY: WRITING ASSIGNMENTS 439

Analysis of Gee’s Claims 439 Discourse Community Ethnography Report 440 Activity Analysis 443 Reflection on Gaining Authority in New Discourse Communities 445

CHAPTER 4 Rhetoric: How Is Meaning Constructed in Context? 447

DOUG DOWNS, Rhetoric: Making Sense of Human Interaction and Meaning-Making 457

Overviews key principles of rhetoric by integrating several theories of rhetoric into a narrative of how writing is rhetorical.

KEITH GRANT-DAVIE, Rhetorical Situations and Their Constituents [TAGGED READING] 484

Retheorizes “rhetorical situation” by defining and giving an extended example of elements that constitute this theory.

JIM RIDOLFO AND DÀNIELLE NICOLE DEVOSS, Composing for Recomposition: Rhetorical Velocity and Delivery 512

Introduces the principle that texts move across time and space and that writers can strategically write their texts to facilitate such remixing and re-presentation, especially in a digital space.

JAMES E. PORTER, Intertextuality and the Discourse Community 542

Explains and analyzes numerous examples of intertextuality, texts being comprised of other, earlier texts and writers’ work.

CHRISTINA HAAS AND LINDA FLOWER, Rhetorical Reading Strategies and the Construction of Meaning 559

Examines reading as a meaning-constructing activity shaped by rhetorical principles, suggesting that readers who think rhetorically are more powerful readers.

MARGARET KANTZ, Helping Students Use Textual Sources Persuasively 579

Extends Haas and Flower’s work on rhetorical reading to the student research-writing situation, suggesting the teaching of rhetorical reading of sources.

JIM W. CORDER, Argument as Emergence, Rhetoric as Love 600

Argues that people don’t make arguments but rather are arguments, and that because conflict between people is a clash of their life narratives, conflict resolution depends on people’s willingness to hear one another’s stories.

ANNALISE SIGONA, Impression Management on Facebook and Twitter: Where Are People More Likely to Share Positivity and Negativity with Their Audiences? [FIRST-YEAR STUDENT TEXT] 619

Studies how people post differently on Facebook and Twitter in order to convey different self-images to different groups of social media users in their lives.

DENNIS BARON, From Pencils to Pixels: The Stages of Literacy Technologies 632

Offers a tour through the history of writing technologies from earliest to current times, with particular emphasis on what it means that today’s writers rarely understand that pencils were once considered high writing technology.

NATASHA N. JONES AND STEPHANIE K. WHEELER, Document Design and Social Justice: A Universal Design for Documents 654

Studies document design from the perspective of accessibility and usability, arguing that writers need to design for all kinds of users rather than stereotypically “abled” ones.

KOMYSHA HASSAN, Digital Literacy and the Making of Meaning: How Format Affects Interpretation in the University of Central Florida Libraries Search Interface [FIRST-YEAR STUDENT TEXT] 674

Tracks students’ use of a library resources web page in order to investigate how the page’s design helps students understand the resources offered.

WRITING ABOUT RHETORIC: WRITING ASSIGNMENTS 692 Rhetorical Analysis of a Previous Writing Experience 692 Rhetorical Reading Analysis: Reconstructing a Text’s Context, Exigence, Motivations, and Aims 694 Mapping a Rhetorical Ecology 697 Analyzing Rhetorical Velocity in Social Media 701

CHAPTER 5 Processes: How Are Texts Composed? 706